I opened my eyes, and thus I became.
Without any knowledge of how or why;
So when I first glimpsed at the profane,
I dropped to my knees and to heaven cried.
I searched for the answer to my question,
But not a single soul was willing to aid,
Instead, they were all in my objection,
Pointing and laughing at my endless pain.
I questioned the Creator Himself:
“Why am I here? To contemplate vanity?
If I’m a mere reflection of yourself
Then you are, just like myself, empty.”
I drink from this glass still not quite knowing
The essence of my painful becoming
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just like myself, sounds better as just like me
ReplyDeleteYou already know how much I love this piece; it just seems so powerful to me. I love how it flows and the rythm of it. I know that there is slant ryme, but it doesn't affect the flow of it to me at all. I really love the message as well. Great job!
ReplyDeletethanks, it was my first sonnet attempt.... I kinda like it, but could be better since I was rushed to finish it =(
ReplyDeleteYou're welcome. XD and you can always edit it
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