Poems will be the death of me,
never letting me be free.
always calling,
write me; write me!
Always luring me,
taunting me with ease,
It'll be easy this time,
you say just to please.
Well I'm tired of it.
I try and try,
and even if I die,
I swear this time will be the time.
I'm writing a poem you see,
smiling with glee.
((Yays!!! I did it :) That was so hard! Tell me what you think and be completely honest! I need all the constructive criticism I can get!))
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haha well done I know howmuch you hate rhyming.... but its pretty nice, simple but fun to read =D
ReplyDeletelol..It took me like twenty minutes to write that...I got so frustrated...and thanks :)
ReplyDeleteWow....twenty minutes? xD Now, I write every poem in like 7 minutes tops haha. Glad, I have improved at "just writing".
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