I've seen it once,
Felt it twice,
Hell I've been through it thrice,
So forgive me if this heart break had no spice.
You've watched it a lot,
But only in a story plot,
You felt it once,
and the story just begun.
For us there was tears,
For me there was distance,
For you there was sickness,
And only your friends, but to witness.
I Writhed in pain,
Thinking of Spain,
I wanted you back,
But life is a trap.
You find something,
You lose it,
Now you've walked out my door,
But hey, its not like it hasn't happened before.
((unedited...get over it))
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I really like the first and fourth stanzas. I like how they flow. The second stanza sounds a little akward to me, the last line in particular; so, you may just want to reword it a little. The fourth stanza is just amazing.
ReplyDeleteI Hate it all, but I think it describes the situation very well.
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