Free Write:
I want to be the Monarch Butterfly I see in front of me. That truly would be the greatest thing. I could fly in and out of the tall blades of grass; I could visit all the beautiful flowers that the world has to offer. I would be free, never to be bogged down by emotions again. Never again would a tear slide down my cheeks; the world would cry enough tears without my help. I could feel the air under my wings, making me almost weightless. My chest would be free of all these emotions. I would be free of all these people around me, constantly bringing me down. Freedom would mean being that mariposa.
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love this piece, its short and yet full of emotion.... there is no way to criticize a free write, so I can't say anything other than this piece is beautiful
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